W.A.L.T: Add imagery to my writing.
S.C: I know I am successful when I include
- Hook
- Closure
- Adjectives
- Powerful verbs
- Similes
On the way to school today…
Oh no falling sheep!
On the way to school today I saw fat sheep falling from the sky into a hot pool, sheep fell into it like a bit of rain.
Shaking trees wibble and wobble to the music inside. The trees were shaking like a volcano erupting.
I wonder what I will see tomorrow?
By Sean
15-08-11
W.A.L.T: Describe a character using imagery in my writing.
S.C: I know I am successful when I include
- Hook
- Closure
- Adjectives
- Powerful verbs
- Similes
My dog Rosie
Wow! Skin shimmies in the sun, a bright puppy called Rosie runs up to me. I feel happy. She stares at a chewy bone I threw for her, when she caught it she sat on my lap. I patted her; her snow is a soft as snow. She is also cute and a bit fluffy. Rosie is a Caviller King Charles Spaniel. The only time she squeals is if she gets a flea and she barks when something is wrong. Brown and white patches on her body sparkle and shimmer when Rosie walks. Her tail wags as fast as a satellite. I love Rosie!
By Bronlee
15-08-11
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